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Editing A Short Film: Planning The Trailer | Editing Blog

A old friend of mine once said “Not because you could, just because you can.”  It’s impossible to explain how funny that comment was but it’s strangely perfect for this post.   You don’t always have to make a trailer for a short film.  But isn’t it fun to edit one together anyways?

The time has come to start thinking about the trailer for The Climb. I’ve been having so much fun editing lately that I started pulling out shots that I know/hope will make the trailer.

What I don’t know is how I will structure the piece.  I don’t know what tone it will have and how I will pace things out.  These are fundamental decisions you have to make when deciding how to sell your film to audiences.

XTRA: Does this poster sell my independent short film?

When I set out to create a trailer for our last short film Playing Through, I struggled with it.  The film balances humor with an extremely emotional situation and I had wanted to find a way to convey both.  There was a very fine line I had to be sure not to cross.  Too far in one direction would have led people to believe it’s a comedy.  Too far in the other direction and people would have given people the impression that the whole film is depressing.

I tried a number of approaches and in the end, I decided to somewhat separate both elements.  This way, I could introduce the two main characters and then gradually integrate the emotional story line.

What do you think?

I think I succeeded but some people still found it hard to determine what tone the movie actually has.  Is it a comedy or isn’t it?  These are all lessons I hope to apply to my new project.  Whether they are right or not it’s still something every editor should think about.  Especially when you’ve written and directed the film.

How do I show people what my movie is about?  How do I engage an audience and generate interest?

The trailer for Playing Through is nearly 2 minutes long.  That’s pretty long for a twenty minute movie.  Perhaps I should have made the trailer shorter?  These are the thoughts I constantly struggle with now as I plan my new project.

It’s important to be honest when creating a trailer.

You have to put your film out there.  How many times have you seen a trailer that was nothing like the finished movie?  You go in thinking it’s going to be an action movie and are shocked to find something different.  (Superman Returns?  Anyone?)

Having said that, I’m proud of the way I cut the Playing Through trailer but I’ll always question things.  It’s a part of my personality.  I’m a perfectionist and I’m extremely critical of my editing and writing.

So now, as I near the end of the editing phase of post production for The Climb, I find myself excited to take on a brand new trailer and introduce the film as best as I can.  I started writing notes and came up with a list of elements I want to include in the trailer that I felt would best represent the story I’m trying to tell.  Selecting these moments can be tough.  You have to leave room to try different things.  You have to be fearless and willing to start over from scratch if something isn’t working.  I’ve got a rough idea of what I want but only time will tell if the trailer will be effective.

Creating a trailer for your short film is not always necessary but as an editor it’s a blast.  I tend to find it intimidating and you may put the same pressure on yourself when you embark on such a creative journey.

But it’s vital that you get it right.  Right?

Especially when you can’t afford to hire a gigantic marketing firm with an army of researchers and creatives ready to tackle your project.

It’s all a part of the fun of making independent films.  It’s addictive.

The Climb Short Film | 17 West Productions

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17 West Productions UPDATE | Independent Film Blog

Today, Eric and I sat down for a few hours and had a fantastic talk about the state of our company 17 West Productions.

It’s amazing how quickly time flies when you’re having fun.

First on the list was to go over the latest cut of The Climb and talk about the direction our newest short film is heading.  It was really great to see someone else react to the many changes I’ve made over the last few weeks. The film has a different style than even I expected but it’s coming together nicely and I’m really happy with it.

XTRA: How A Dialogue Heavy Script Became A Quiet Movie

I’m fired up more than ever to get the film done. From here, I plan to finish a viewable cut of the film by the end of May with a trailer online in June.  Look for more updates as we inch closer to our planned release this fall.

The Climb low budget short film Toronto 17 West Productions

In other ‘Climb’ related news, I’ve started the sound design process as well as testing various music styles.  It’s so much fun to bring a movie together and I’m loving it.  This will be the first short film I’ve mixed on my own beyond balancing levels and I’m looking forward to the challenge.

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Business was next as we talked about all of our projects and the state of our company as a whole.  We went through our past projects and planned where to take Playing Through next.  The film has completed it’s festival run and is currently being played online (in Canada) as part of the NSI Online Short Film Festival.  We talked a lot about what to do with the film next including it’s eventual release online for everyone to see.  Stay tuned for more.

Pitching Screenplays

Next up was a discussion about NEW projects! Always the best part of our meetings.  I started and pitched him about 3 or 4 ideas.  One of which I’m writing now that’s set in 1994 and one of the strangest and unique concepts I’ve come up with lately (I think at least). The other ideas are still in the early stages of development and I’ve learned that I still get nervous when I pitch new ideas.

There was a time when I was too self conscious to talk about any new ideas until they were fully developed.  Over the last few years, I’ve grown to love the process.  You can’t be afraid.  Bouncing ideas of someone is a great way to sort out the ideas with promise and the ones that need more work.  Needless to say, I can’t wait to crack open Final Draft and complete the first draft of my new script.

We then moved on to an idea Eric has mentioned several times and really went in depth with the characters and the story.  It’s a pretty dark tale and I’m actually pumped to see how it develops in the coming weeks.

Until then, it’s all about writing new screenplays and editing the short film. Lots to look forward to.

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Editing A Short Film: Tackling The BIG SCENE | Editing Blog

17 West’s new short film, The Climb, has one huge make or break scene.  The script is 16 pages and this particular scene, known as ‘The Bridge’, clocks in at 7 pages.

It’s the scene that carries the weight of the movie and it has to be perfect. These are stressful scenes to take on with so much riding on them.  Last week I locked one of the final scenes leading up to The Bridge and now I’m faced with the biggest editing challenge of the whole project.

The Bridge is basically a 7 page emotional conversation between 2 damaged characters.  The challenge here is to keep the scene moving for the 8-9 minutes I’ll need to do it justice.  9 minutes of talking in a short film is no easy task.  It has to be edited very carefully.

Editing The Big Scene

The trick going into a scene like that is to watch every take you’ve got and come up with a plan.  Lines will be cut and angles will be switched often but to me, it all starts with a few key magic moments.

Editing A Short Film: Taking On The BIG SCENE

I’ve come to call them SuperTakes.  A shot that has elements that HAVE to be in the final film.  It could be a facial expression or a well delivered line of dialogue.  Watching the footage led me to create a tiny sequence of SuperTakes that I absolutely adore.

The plan in this case is to build the big scene up around those moments and adjust accordingly.  It’s basically like creating a rough outline for a screenplay.  You write down the main beats of the film and then work hard to fill in the blanks in between.

It feels easier now that I have a rough road map.

All In

The one issue I’m going to be faced with is time.  When we shot this scene, we basically covered about 12-15 angles and had our two actors play the entire scene on each.  Both had experience in theater and the more we shot, the more refined the scene became.  I found working that way helped me (as director) decide how certain lines needed to be delivered.

We then went back and shot some specific moments to make sure we had the scene covered.  You can imagine that some of these takes were 12-13 minutes long once you factor in pauses and such.  My estimate of a final 8-9 minutes could be an easy target or it could be extremely hard to cut while still preserving the scene.

Editing The Climb, A short film. The Big Scene

What approach would you take?

I’ve decided to cut the entire scene as is and then trim the crap out of it. It’s a daunting task when you are dealing with a huge scene full of key plot moments.  I knew going in that The Bridge was going to be the most challenging scene to edit but I’m looking forward to it.

These are the scenes that every editor wants to cut.  It’s too early at this point to truly know if I can pull it off without the film slowing down considerably but that’s the beauty of editing.  Don’t be afraid to jump in and see what happens.

You have to try new things and keep pushing yourself until you create something you’re proud of.  At the end of the day, that’s what really matters.  I’m a big fan of a peaceful night’s rest after a productive day.

It’s just me, the footage and Final Cut Pro now.  I’m going to be sleeping well the next few weeks.

XTRA: Take THAT Opening Scene.

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CNN, Movies, Blogging & Screenwriting | Movie Blog

HOW LOSING SLEEP CAN LEAD TO A
CREATIVE OUTBURST

I fell a sleep the other night around eleven which is seriously early considering most days I’m in bed by 1 or 2am. At 7am, my girlfriend woke up for work and I turned on CNN like I always do.

On a normal day, CNN works like a radio as I close my eyes and fall back a sleep. However, this particular day was different. I had way too much on my mind… I felt like working.

So I got out of bed, got dressed, fired up my Mac and got to work.

SEIZE THE MOMENT

Sometimes, you just can’t help but feel inspired and truly unleash your creativity. Moments like these have to be acted on. I could have stayed in bed and slept until noon but that isn’t getting my movie edited, my blog updated or my screenplay written is it?

36 Websites I Visit Every Day

My first order of business was to eat cereal and catch up on all my blogs, sports updates and movie news. This normally takes a while but it’s important to stay up to date. Most of the time, these sites inspire new blog posts so it’s worth it.

WORDPRESS

For the first time in weeks, my daily post wasn’t ready to go. I had to write something from scratch. So I organized my thoughts and wrote Buried vs 127 Hours. A look at the different editing styles the film’s used to tell their story.

Once I finished the post, I was still feeling energized. It was time for the heavy hitters.

FINAL DRAFT

Launching Final Draft always makes me smile. Two days ago, I finished a new short screenplay called The Guardian and I spent a couple hours rewriting and editing my gritty 9 page superhero drama.

Rewriting is my favorite step. I’m the type of writer that completes the first draft without stopping much. I just want to get the story and the major plot points on to the page.

I usually leave the script for a day or two and then I edit and refine every single word until I’m 100% happy that I’ve told a unique and entertaining story. Sometimes, I finish a short and it doesn’t feel unique at all. These moments are unfortunate but every screenplay you write is an evolution of the writer you wish to become.

Once I finished my first pass at the rewrite I printed it out for my ‘red pen’ stage. I basically leave my office and read the script free from distraction with nothing but my thoughts and a pen. This step is followed up by typing it AGAIN from page one using my rewritten copy and my notes as guides.

It’s going to be a fun week but my day didn’t end there.

FINAL CUT PRO

I’ve been making sure to leave myself at least a few hours every possible day I can to make progress on 17 West’s latest short film The Climb.

The Climb Short Film 17 West Productions

It helps that I’ve been writing more and more about the editing process over the last week or so.

XTRA: Click here to check out the editing archives.

I fired up the most recent cut of The Climb and completed a scene from start to finish. In what felt like an instant, I put together a pretty great little 1 minute scene full of dialogue. It helped that I already had a good idea of how I wanted to pace the scene but I was amazed at how easily it came together.

In the end, I edited for a couple hours and even found time to go back and refine a few moments I wasn’t happy with earlier in the film.

It’s really starting to come along!

DONKEY KONG?

Every brain needs a break now and then and my escape when I can’t play sports is video games. Currently, I’m right in the middle of Donkey Kong Country Returns and I just dominated the fifth world.

It’s a really hard game so I’m quite proud to be almost done!

Break over.  Still completely inspired to work.

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WORDPRESS RETURNS

I felt fantastic. I had already accomplished so much with my extended morning but I still felt inspired to work. So I continued my quest to go back and update old posts. I literally started with post number 1 and managed to get through about 20 or so before I called it quits.

These old posts are now updated with better SEO keywords, titles and graphics. I also wanted to include relevant links to posts I’ve created since those articles were published. This process is probably going to take months considering I’ve written nearly 600 posts.

Still, it’s important work and I’m happy I was able to get a few done just in time to get ready for work.

CELTX FOR IPHONE

XTRA: Read my review of Celtx here.

It takes about 20 minutes to get to the studio where I work. Still feeling extremely creative, I used that time to start a 1 page screenplay we may shoot for a competition towards the end of March.

It may never get filmed but at least I can create a script and find out if it’s worth it or not. So I fired up my Celtx for iPhone app and nearly got the first draft finished before I got to work.

The script is extremely rough and needs work but the basic outline of the story is out there and I think it may have some use down the road even if we don’t make the quickly approaching deadline.

EDITING PROFESSIONAL SPORTS

From there, I got to work and prepared for a busy night filled with big hockey games and a ton of live shows. 11 hours of editing stood between me and what was definitely a good night sleep!

It was a fantastic day!

SEIZE THE MOMENT!

My shift started at 2:30. I’m really happy I didn’t sleep until 11 and waste what ultimately became an incredibly productive afternoon.

Seizing these moments is crucial if you want to succeed in a creative medium. Even if it’s just a hobby and you aren’t aspiring to be a professional.  You have to constantly think about your projects and how you can make them better.  You have to dedicate yourself and get the work done.  Not because it’s work but because it’s what you love to do.

Yet every so often, something clicks and you end up with mornings like I just had.  Moments when you can’t seem to keep up with the ideas bursting from your imagination.

If only every morning was like that.

FIND A JOB YOU LOVE
NEVER WORK A DAY IN YOUR LIFE

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Editing: How A Dialogue Heavy Script Became A Quiet Movie

I love editing.

Whether it’s at work or at home with Final Cut Pro I’m hooked.

Currently, I’m completely engrossed in my new short film, The Climb.  We shot the film in May but post has been a slow process due to life in general.

Still, I’m not working with a deadline and so it’s nice to be able to work on it when I can.  A few weeks ago, I dedicated myself again and really thought about the completed film and what I want it to be.

The result of that thought process surprised me.

The script for The Climb was a finalist in a screenwriting competition way back in the 2007.  It ended up being 4th out of about 1200 short scripts.

The script itself was always dialogue heavy and as it evolved, it was even more dependent on dialogue.

XTRA: Tweaking Your Screenplay

When we shot the film, I thought that the actor’s delivery of those lines would make or break the movie.  They did a great job but something else about their performances struck me and changed the direction of my edit.

Some of the dialogue wasn’t needed.  I’m very happy we were able to capture some of the quieter moments on set when we had the chance.  I always intended to shoot beyond the dialogue on the page and it definitely paid off.

Now, I can sit back and watch the first 5 minutes of the film and marvel at the 3 minutes of silence at the beginning.  The same information is being conveyed but no one is saying anything.

Quicker cuts.  Better pacing.

I’ve definitely learned to step back and really think about each shot and what it means to the story as a whole.  It’s an opportunity to be creative and that’s why I love editing so much.  So many possibilities.  So many things to try and the only limit is your imagination.

I’m having a blast.

It’s a far cry from the screenplay we filmed but that script did it’s job well.  Now it’s time to build something original and entertaining.

Editing.  I love this stuff.

XTRA: The Climb Update

Check out the film’s official page by clicking the image below.

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