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Rushing To Finish Your Screenplay

I’m almost finished.

After months (or years in the case of my latest screenplay) of work, I’m finally almost finished.

My little side project has gone through quite the development process over the last little while.  I’ve seen each page evolve as I have as a screenwriter.

I think when I look back 10 years from now, I will look back at this script as a turning point in my screenwriting career.

Why?

Mainly because I promised myself once and for all that I wouldn’t start another feature script until I completed this story.

Now I can see the finish line. I know where I’m going with the story and the scenes are laid out in front of me.  The characters are working and the emotions are there.

You can imagine how excited I am to finish it.  I’ve been filled with an overwhelming sense of anticipation all week.

Yet this morning I had to take a step back.

I didn’t want the finish line to blur the pages I have to write before I get there.  They have to be great.

So with 15-20 pages to go, I took the morning off from writing new pages and went back to page one.

I wanted to go over every single detail and make sure I was ready to finish my story properly.

It was a fantastic decision as I wound up eliminating 2 scenes and an entire character.  I’ll miss the material I created but the story is better for it.

The process actually inspired a new scene in the second act that may or may not be my favorite of the entire script.

It wouldn’t be possible if I rushed through the final pages simply to get it done.  That’s not enough.

You can’t take short cuts.

There’s nothing better than finishing a screenplay but it means nothing if you feel like you didn’t dedicate yourself completely to every single page.

Sometimes, the lure of the finish line can cause you to miss the little details and revelations that make a script great. 

Don’t fall victim to this trap.

Tomorrow, I’ll know that I’m 100% ready to reach the end.

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Screenwriting: Make Actors Fight To Play Your Characters

I take public transit to and from work everyday.

Normally, I spend my time writing screenplays, reading novels, playing iPhone games or working on this blog.  However, there are times when I simply observe the people on the train.

People watching is a hard skill to master without appearing creepy. You have to be discreet.

Once mastered, the power of observation can help you create incredible characters with interesting quirks and traits.  Or it can inspire you to become a better writer. Allow me to explain.

On a recent trip home I encountered a young woman who was studying a couple pages of a screenplay.  Clearly an actress.

I was fascinated by how hard she was trying.  Each mannerism and gesture was carefully thought out.

She was accompanied by a friend who was reading the exact same pages but I figured she was just there to help her friend rehearse.

I was right as they soon began to rehearse the scene right there on the subway.

The actress poured her heart out in a short scene that involved a young woman talking to her father on his death bed.

The writing was actually quite good and I found myself wondering if it was a short, feature or perhaps a play.

What also struck me as interesting was how angry the actress got when her friend started making jokes.

“Just read the lines right, there isn’t much time left.”

They restarted but it wasn’t long before her friend made another joke.

“Seriously, you gotta read them normal.  I HAVE to get this right.”

It got me thinking about how important this role must have been for her. I imagined countless hours reading the same 2-3 pages over and over again so she would nail her audition.

I wondered whether or not the writer would ever know how bad this actress wanted to win the role.  He had written something that inspired this person to dedicate everything she had just for a chance to become that character.

Maybe she thought it could be her big break.  Maybe she was already an up and coming actress.  Maybe she didn’t get the role at all.

Regardless, a few pages had managed to make this girl so tense she yelled at her friend who was only trying to help.

I think every character you write should be written with actors like that in mind.  Every character.

I remember the first time I sat in an audition room and listened to actors read lines I had written.

They were nervous.  I wonder if they knew how nervous I was?

Who am I?  Why would anyone be nervous to act in front of me?  I remember thinking about lines I should rewrite.  I felt self conscious.

I actually suggested a change at one point but an actor took offense.  He didn’t want me to change a thing.  It was a nice compliment.

I still changed the line later on though.

It’s incredible what a little people watching can do.  That day, I asked myself 3 questions.

  1. Are my characters interesting enough?

  2. Will actors want to play my characters?

  3. Will actors fight to play my characters?

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Inspiring Places To Write Screenplays

You never know when you’ll feel inspired to write.

That’s why I’m always seeking out new ways to kick start my creativity.

I’ve been developing a short screenplay that deals with fishing in a secluded pond deep in a forest.

I’m loving the work I’ve done so far and the direction the story is heading but I was lacking that spark.  Some unknown factor that would vault the script out of development and into Final Draft.

So I figured, why not go to a similar location?

A Perfect Place To Write Screenplays

I used my dog as an excuse and went beyond the baseball diamond and football fields we normally visit every morning.

On this day, we traveled into a park and soon found ourselves far from the cement paths and groomed playgrounds.

A Perfect Place To Write Screenplays

A Perfect Place To Write Screenplays

My mind started working. While we walked I worked out the tone of the screenplay and how I wanted to spread out the important story points.

Suddenly, I fell into a trance and the next hour was a blur.

Before I knew it, I had a scene list in my mind and everything was ready to go except a few small details.

What started as a search for that elusive spark turned into an inspiring and productive walk in the woods with my dog.

Feeling stuck on a new story?

You never know when inspiration will strike.  I say, instead of waiting for it, head out into the world and make it happen yourself.

A Perfect Place To Write Screenplays

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Crosstown: Writing A Short Screenplay

  • 1 Bus
  • 2 Subways
  • 1 Cab
  • 1 Boat
  • 1 Plane

This is the route I planned to take on a recent trip home.

Just before I began to pack I came up with an idea.

Challenge myself to come up with a concept for a new screenplay and write it by the time the plane lands.

The twist?  I decided to film the journey with my iPhone and cut together a little video of my creative afternoon.

How often do you get a chance to make a ‘making of’ documentary about writing a screenplay?

The video itself isn’t the most entertaining thing in the world but I like watching it knowing that I was working the entire time.

The story I came up with is called:

Crosstown.

It’s the story of a young woman’s search for someone she cared about long ago.  Believing she may have found the person she is looking for, she rides the same bus for hours hoping for the chance to change her life.

I think it’s interesting that my first thought was to use my own surroundings as inspiration.

So here is a movie I made, about a writing a movie on a bus ride and the story is about riding a bus too…  Whew.

Still with me?

Check out the video below.

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The Athletic Nerd | The Screenwriting Spark Volume 4

This edition of The Spark is all about the huge amount of resources available to today’s aspiring screenwriter.

It’s incredibly easy to get lost searching for screenwriting tips and techniques online.  Communities like Twitter’s Scriptchat have formed to encourage better writing.

It’s an inspiring thought knowing that no matter how stuck you can become, there are people out there willing to lend a hand.

Don’t believe me?

Check out this list of Awesome Screenwriting Websites.  Over 120 and rising.

Volume 4

Twitter Sparks:

Recommended Follow: @robertshutter

Script Secrets: High Concept Generation – Script Magazine

The 6 Tools of Comedy – Raindance

Read To Write: Some Thoughts On Screenwriting – Timothy Visentin

17 Reasons Your Screenplay Got Rejected – NPR

Script Inception: Story or Character – ScriptLab

Lance Kawas Interview – Rex Sikes’ Movie Beat

Three Less Orthodox Story Structures – The Last Reveal

BONUS REVIEW:

Celtx for iPhone and iPad.

Is Celtx the definitive screenwriting app for your mobile device?

10 Flicks: Movies That Make Me Feel Like Writing

Just making that list ignited my imagination and before I knew it, I had written a ton.  It’s kind of a full proof way to motivate yourself.

Make your own list.  What movies start that elusive fire within?  Which movies can you watch over and over again and marvel at how they can inspire you every single time.

If you still don’t feel like writing once your list is completed watch each and every one of them!

Another possible cure for writer’s block?

It’s worked for me.

FADE OUT.

The Screenwriting Spark Volume 4

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