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SOMETIMES CHARACTERS YOU ENVISIONED JUST DON’T FIT…
YOUR VISION.

I’m currently working on a screenplay that has 4 main characters and I love it so far.  But that wasn’t always the case.  In the beginning, there was 5…

When I set out to outline the story, I incorporated a character that I felt needed to exist.  But he was a problem from the moment I typed his name.  You see, the other 4 characters have great stories and relationships with one another.  The fifth character was an outsider simply because I couldn’t find ways to fit him into their lives.  He never had anything interesting to do but I was stuck because he was eventually going to matter…

Still, that didn’t change the fact that he was dead weight.  He would appear to be part of the group but his dialogue wasn’t needed.  He really only talked because he was in the room and I felt like he had to.

When I finished the first act, I found the number of characters I introduced to be a tad confusing.

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I set out to make my character introductions more memorable while eliminating as many distractions as possible.  I quickly came to the realization that my beloved 5th character wasn’t needed.  I started coming up with creative ways to avoid writing him into the story and the story got a lot better.  It felt right.  As I began eliminating all traces of the character from my screenplay, things became more clear and focused.

The truth is, if a character feels forced or has nothing interesting to do, it’s probably time for the axe to fall.  I knew deep down the character wasn’t going to work.  That’s the advantage of a first draft.  I gave him a shot and he didn’t fit but at least I know definitively now.  It can be pretty hard to let go sometimes but you have to ask yourself an important question:

Does this make my screenplay better?

Moving forward, I’m happier with my simpler and more focused story.

And the journey continues.

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First, I wrote a short screenplay called The Climb.

Next, I corrected a billion spelling mistakes and called it a day.

Years later when we decided to make the movie, I engaged in a series of rewrites.

After a few months of pre-production, I improved it even further.

This week, we had our first cast read through and rehearsal.

It was time to tweak the script.

The moral of the story? It got better every time!

You really do have to be open to changes and let the script evolve on it’s own. Version 5.1 of The Climb is easily the best and most polished to date.

Here’s why…

Listening and observing actors perform gives you a lot of information you may not have considered when writing the script.

Lines that sound fantastic on the page may not translate well in real life.

This process will bring some much needed changes to light and in the case of The Climb, the changes were welcome.

The beauty of rehearsing with actors lies in the conversations you have throughout.  Everyone involved had comments, questions and suggestions dealing with everything from dialogue to motivation.

What’s amazing to me is most of the tweaks made sense.  It had me thinking:

“Why didn’t I think of that before?”

To me it doesn’t matter as long as I feel like I’ve done everything I can before the cameras roll.

That and there is no better feeling than implementing a new idea that makes a screenplay better.   It’s never too late to eliminate a line that isn’t working or change words here and there.

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Tweaks are not to be feared.

They are absolutely vital to creating a shooting draft that you and everyone involved will believe in.

The more I refine the script, the happier I am because it keeps getting better.  To a certain extent, it scares me a little bit when I think about the changes I may realize once it’s too late and we’ve wrapped.

To quote athletes everywhere…

“You have to leave it on the court.”

The same rule applies to the ice, the field, the movie set and even the cutting room floor.

What I mean by that, is that I feel confident knowing I worked as hard as possible because there is a point when you have to let go.

For me that won’t happen until I yell cut on the final take.

In short…  I like rewrites.

They are a crucial part of the filmmaking process.

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