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The Athletic Nerd On PAUSE…

August 11th, 2011 | Posted by jasonmckinnon in Web - (0 Comments)

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After nearly two years and over 650 posts, it’s time to go on tiny vacation.  I say vacation but in reality, I’m taking a break to catch up on some other exciting projects and gear up for the remainder of 2011.  First things first, I’ve decided to take some time away from all things Nerd and 17 West.  I still have a career but I’ll be spending my afternoons outside, playing sports and relaxing.  I’m definitely going to need it with what I have planned for in the weeks that follow.

My list of projects has grown pretty large and it’s time to wrap some things up.  I’m so excited I can’t stand it.

FINISH EDITING THE CLIMB

The Climb was always meant to be an exercise in editing.  We shot the film in May of 2010 and I’ve been experimenting ever since.  When I first began, I cut the film entirely as I shot and scripted it.  Then I threw that cut out the window and started again with a different approach.  Some moments lived but the movie was vastly different in virtually every single aspect.  I threw that cut out as well.  I wanted to challenge myself to try as many different combinations as possible.  It wasn’t because I was unsure of the film.  I just wanted to edit and learn.

A few months ago, I decided it was time to stop messing around and really tackled the real edit of the film.  I was surprised to find a lot of material worked in different ways and the movie was better than I had hoped.  A movie that was once full of dialogue was evolving into a quiet story about two unfortunate people living on the streets.

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I figure I’ve got about 4 or 5 minutes of the film left to lock and I’ll be spending the next few weeks finishing the cut and getting ready for sound, music and color.

The film is on track to be 100% completed by early 2012.  It seems like a fair distance away yet but I’m handling most of that work on my own.  Basically, I’m in it to learn new techniques and software and I can’t wait to dive in.

THE CLIMB’S TRAILER

I began work yesterday on some After Effects projects I’ll be using in the upcoming trailer for the film.  The idea is to have it online by the end of September.

XTRA | Planning The Trailer For A Short Film

A BRAND NEW WEBSITE

I’ve kept fairly quiet on this for a long time but for about 6 weeks now, I’ve been writing posts for a brand new blog!  The site is pretty unique for me because it’s less focused on movies and more on short stories and character development.  Sitting here typing this post, I’m tempted to reveal what it is but that wouldn’t be very much fun.

Over the next few weeks, I’ll be finishing up the last of the ‘launch’ posts and creating all the promotional material for the unveiling of my new blog.  I can’t wait to lift the curtains and I’m hopeful that people will find it entertaining.  I’m certainly having a blast writing these little tales.

A FEATURE LENGTH SCREENPLAY

My new script is coming along and I’m loving it.  Unfortunately, I set an unrealistic goal of September 1st for the first draft.  I sincerely doubt I’ll hit that date but I’d like to be finishing up the second act by then.

17WEST.CA

My production company’s home is 17west.ca and that site has definitely evolved as I’ve learned more about web and graphic design.  Now that I’ve built a couple sites with WordPress, I’m confident enough to completely rebuild 17 West’s site with better content, easier updating, more social tools, better features, more video and a lot more.  This new site is due to launch around the same time The Climb is completed.  In the next little while, my business partner and I will be starting preliminary research on what we want the site to look like.

THE ATHLETIC NERD’S TWO YEAR ANNIVERSARY!

On September 15th, I’ll be celebrating my two year blogging anniversary.  Last year, I produced a week long event that saw more than 10 posts get published.  It included some of my favorite posts, recaps, features and the launch of my Interviews section.  Since then, I’ve interviewed a bunch of fantastic people and the feature has become one of the most popular on this blog.

This year I’ll be changing things up.  Again it will be a week long event but I’ll be launching a brand new feature that will only happen once a year.  I’ve got some graphics to build for it but I’m really excited to kick things off.  In the mean time, I’ll be wrapping up the final Movie That Scarred Me For Life and launching my newest feature: If I Could Only Recommend One…

PLANTING SEEDS

Obviously, the priorities are The Climb and my new screenplay but there are more projects I’d like to keep fresh in my mind.  We are still actively developing the next 17 West short film and hopefully we will have a plan in place by the end of the year.

I’ve also been toying around with the idea of creating two eBooks.  These are massive projects that aren’t front and center yet but planning them has been fun.

ON A PERSONAL NOTE

I really think I’m going to have several panic attacks throughout the next few weeks.  I love this site and taking a break is hard when I’ve grown accustomed to writing a new post almost every day.  This was a tough decision but I’ll be pretty occupied during the break.  On the other side, I’ll have tons of posts to share.

In the mean time, catch up on old posts by visiting the archives in the sidebar.

I’d also like to take a moment to thank all of my readers but especially those that visit every day.  Watching my statistics rise has been a great source of pride for me.  Knowing that there are people out there who enjoy the site has literally been the fuel that keeps me writing everyday.  Basically, what I’m trying to say is DON’T GO ANYWHERE!

CONTRIBUTE, ADVERTISE, PROMOTE, COMMENT

If you have any suggestions for the site email me at jason@17west.ca or comment below.  There are two major changes coming to The Athletic Nerd towards the end of 2011.  The first is a new advertising system (A free advertising system I might add) and the second is guest posts.  More details on both will be arriving soon.

THE ATHLETIC NERD RETURNS…

Monday September 5, 2011. 

In the mean time, I’ll still be writing posts here and there but they will all be published after I put a significant dent into my workload for August.  However, I will still be posting any and ALL reviews.

Enjoy the rest of the summer!

Cheers,

Jason.

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What To Do When A Movie Is Released BEFORE You Get A Chance To Write It | Screenwriting Blog

YOU HAVE AN IDEA…  BUT SOMEONE ELSE HAD IT FIRST

A long time ago, when I was about 14 years old, I began writing a screenplay called Hidden.  It was the story of 2 rival crime organizations battling for control of a lucrative yet mysterious technology.  Caught in the middle, there was a man trying to discover the truth behind 2 suspicious murders and finds himself wanted by both groups…

And then Romeo Must Die came out…

There was one huge difference between my script and Jet Li’s Shakespearean Oakland fight flick…  Their movie was a better.

I remember being absolutely shattered sitting in the theater watching Romeo Must Die.  Not only was it similar to the story I was trying to tell but these writers and filmmakers did a better job.  I put Hidden on the shelf but I didn’t come away from that experience empty handed.  The movie put some things into perspective.  After the shock wore off, I saw it as an opportunity to evolve as a screenwriter.  I was encouraged in a strange way.  My concept wasn’t anywhere near as well developed as Romeo Must Die but it had some similarities.  Perhaps I could come up with Hollywood movie concepts.

To some, that’s an extremely naive approach but it didn’t raise my confidence levels.  In a sense, it inspired me to come up with bigger and better stories.  I threw out and deleted every trace of Hidden after that.  From that point on, I began researching the kinds of stories I wanted to tell.  If I found something similar and the story was worth it, I would brainstorm ways to set my story apart.  A way to keep my scripts original and as entertaining as possible.

Even as I type this it sounds easy but it’s not.  It’s never fun spotting a television commercial for a completed project that you’re still in the middle of pouring your heart into.

In fact, it happened to me again a few years ago.  I was working on a script involving a vampire.  My 17 West business partner Eric has always wanted to make a vampire film so I kicked some concepts around and came up with something that I thought would make a pretty cool vampire drama. (I still do.)

Then came True Blood.  Once that show took off, vampires dominated the film and television world.  None of the films and television shows were similar to my concept but the craze killed it for me.  Instead, I began taking notes of what I liked about those projects and what I didn’t.  Someday, I’ll return to that story when the vampire’s popularity dies down a tad. (pun intended)  When that time comes, I’ll be well equipped with cliches to ignore and familiar arcs to avoid.

It happened again a year ago while we were developing a short film about zombies.  Then came The Walking Dead…  You know how this story ends.

WHAT TO DO?

Don’t get discouraged.  I put my last two projects on the shelf because it wasn’t the right time to write them.  That doesn’t mean I’ve abandoned them like Hidden long ago.  They remain very relevant in my storytelling plans.  When the time is right, I’ll tell my vampire story and make it as original as possible.

That’s the key.  If you spot a television show or film similar to your script, work harder!  If you believe in the story with all of your heart then study and make it work regardless.

If you do feel like you have to trash your script (and that’s okay), take some elements with you.  Just because the concept has been done before doesn’t mean your characters, action sequences or even lines of dialogue have to die along with it.  Hold on to your creations.  You’ll never know when they will come in handy.

It might be fate and/or destiny.  Someday, you’ll need a character who embodies certain qualities and you’ll be ready.  What if you ‘had’ to write a story and abandon it just to develop one specific character?  There are positives everywhere.

I’m the first to admit that finding out your original work of art has been done can be heartbreaking.  A moment like that can have a tremendous impact on your work.  Push through it.  Find the positives.  Write.

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Dreams On Spec: A Screenwriting Documentary Review | Screenwriting Blog

THE WRITER’S LIFE.  THE WRITER’S DREAMS

I got an email a while back that contained a link to a screenwriting documentary called Dreams On Spec.  A film I highly enjoyed.

Here is a the synopsis from the film’s official site:

Featuring interviews with James L. Brooks, Nora Ephron, Carrie Fisher, and other screenwriting luminaries, DREAMS ON SPEC takes an intimate look at how far people will go – and how much they will sacrifice – to pursue their dreams. This feature-length documentary follows three screenwriters as they struggle against overwhelming odds – and often their families’ disapproval – to turn their scripts into movies.

Aspiring filmmakers definitely have a lot of docs to turn to for inspiration.  Just about every DVD and Blu Ray has a commentary track or a behind the scenes documentary these days.  Many of them are elaborate and extremely inspiring. (See The Lord of the Rings Extended Editions for examples of this.)  Every once in a while, there will be a detailed look at how the screenplays came together as well.  One of my favorites is “All I Need Is An Idea” located on The Phantom Menace DVD.   However, there aren’t a ton of documentaries that focus on the aspiring screenwriter out there.

Note: If there are others I expect an email immediately…

DREAMS ON SPEC

This documentary was fantastic.  It’s a candid look at three separate writer’s journeys at different stages in their careers.  The film examines their passion for screenwriting as well as the impact that dedication has on their lives.  Ironically, the email that alerted me to this movie’s existence came about a week before I started my new feature length screenplay.  I watched it the day before I went off to the library to finish mapping out my movie.

Some might say that watching a documentary about 3 writers who struggle to make it might be discouraging to a screenwriter about to start something new.  Honestly, if I let that bother me, I don’t have the right to call myself a screenwriter.  Writing a screenplay is hard but it’s fun and that’s why we write.

The business aspect of the industry takes over once you type fade out.  Until that time, it’s just me and my characters wandering around a new world trying to tell a story.  At one point, one of the writer’s states that his new screenplay is the best he’s every written and nothing he writes afterwards will ever compare.  I have to disagree.  In the end, he will write something else but you always need that drive to be better.

In that sense, I completely related to the screenwriters in Dreams On Spec because I found myself examining my own process.  It wasn’t their dreams of money and success but instead their passion that I enjoyed watching.  It was their love of the craft of screenwriting.  The final 20 minutes or so is extremely powerful as the writer’s come to grips with their work.

One naive moment stuck out for me.  It happens around the 1:02:00 mark in which a writer expresses what he wants his project to become.

“I’d like to get 5 name actors attached to the five main roles.  I’d like to get a few million dollars… Not a kazillion but you know 5 or 10 million dollars…  I’d like it to be released theatrically.  I’d like for whoever gives me the money to give me enough creative control and kind of leave me alone…”

I think aspiring screenwriters around the world can relate to that statement but for me, it put things into perspective.  I’m not going to get ahead of myself.  First and foremost, I HAVE to write.

Dreams On Spec is a great documentary for screenwriters out there.  The outcomes of their stories may be a little bleak but I think the lesson here is simple:

Work hard to realize your goals and when it doesn’t work out…  Work harder.  Write because you love to write.

I’ve included a preview of the film below but you can watch the entire documentary FREE online at SNAGFILMS.

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Movie Blogging: Tiny Tweaks

July 14th, 2011 | Posted by jasonmckinnon in Design | Technology | Web - (0 Comments)

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I’ve always said that I’m no genius when it comes to web design but I manage.  Over the last few days, I’ve spent time tweaking and enhancing the design of my blog.

The first thing I added was a long overdue PAGE navigation system which you can find at the bottom of the page.  Replacing the ‘older posts’ and ‘newer posts’ links has been on my list of things to do for a while now as it allows people to go back and read my previous posts in a more efficient way.

Next up was a new navigation system in my sidebar.  Essentially, it includes the most popular categories on the blog with a drop down list containing the rest.  This is a lot easier to go directly to the category that interests you.  I messed around a lot with positioning and such but I think it’s in a good spot.  I still want the spotlight to be on my most recent articles so they remain on top.

Finally, you’ll notice a brand new SCREENWRITING Advertisement promoting my number one passion.  There are now more than 100 original articles on screenwriting on this blog with more added each and every week.

I also spent a lot of time cleaning up some old posts, deleting a few outdated articles and re-evaluating my stable of plugins.  The result should be a much easier site to explore.  There are some more tweaks I’m working on but for now, I’m happy with the work I did.

I think it’s important to constantly think about how you can make your blog better.  New graphics are a great way to start but for me, it will always be about the content.  So you can still expect to see daily articles for the foreseeable future.

As always, if you have any questions, comments or suggestions email me at jason@17west.ca.

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Starting A New Feature Screenplay | Screenwriting Blog

I finished my last feature length screenplay earlier this year.  It was a drama loosely based on my time in college and by loosely based I mean the location stuck and maybe a couple scattered inside jokes.  It was about growing up or more specifically, realizing you’re already a grown up.

The next feature I wanted to write was an extremely sad drama about redemption and family.  However, after some thought, I decided it was time to step out of my comfort zone.  Over the last few years, I’ve written a bunch of dramatic short screenplays including Playing Through and The Climb.  Both are short films I directed.

XTRA | Directing Short Films: Playing Through vs The Climb

This time, I wanted to change things up.  I wanted action.  So I decided to put my new drama on hold and develop a superhero movie.  Automatically this caused problems because in today’s movie world, superheroes are everywhere.  How could I set myself a part?  What could I write that would be different and fresh?

I set out to develop a concept I came up with last year and really worked hard over these last few months to work out a story I felt was worthy.  The first thing I did was eliminate the word superhero from my vocabulary.  I like to tell people I’m working on the least heroic superhero movie I could think of.  I hit some snags here and there.  Mainly with my main character.  Yet somehow, I surprised myself by how attached I became to his story.

XTRA | Make Actors Fight To Play Your Characters

THE DRAMA RETURNED

The biggest surprise came when I realized my superhero movie turned into a drama.  It does have big action but it also has big tears.

Last week, I spent 4 hours in a local library with nothing except a blank notebook and a pen.  I wrote the entire story with as much detail as possible.  It wasn’t quite a treatment or an outline but rather an OutMENT.  (OutMENT?  Just remember who made up that term!)

Essentially, my outMENTs are a series of point form notes mixed with larger descriptions of key scenes and characters.  They’re full of story notes in the margins and most of the time they’re a complete mess.  For me, these outMENTS aren’t meant to be a reference point unless I get stuck.  They are meant to be my first official crack at the story.  My chance to get it straight in my mind and establish an overall style.

Will my story be told in sequence or in a non linear fashion?  How will scenes work together?  Which voice will I choose for my characters or rather, which voice will they choose for themselves?  How can I make this better?

These are all questions you have to work out in your mind before you start a project like this.  I restarted my previous script about 9 times from scratch because I didn’t take the time to work out the broad strokes early.  I learned my lesson.

IT BEGINS…

Developing a new feature length screenplay requires more than creativity and hard work.  It requires a passion for the story. 

After my time in the library, I knew the passion was there.  So yesterday, for the first time, I sat down and started writing.  My development work isn’t completely finished but I have enough of the story roughed out.  I couldn’t help it.  It’s been so long since I really worked on a feature length action screenplay.  I HAD to write some of these action scenes.

Truthfully, I’ve only written 2 feature length action scripts in my life.  The first is absolutely awful and the second was deleted, burnt and shredded.  It no longer exists.

It’s good to be writing action again.  The unknown has kept me up at night, excited about the possibilities.  Who knows where this story will end up?  Regardless of whether or not this script ‘makes it’, after yesterday, I know it’s going to be a blast to write.  For now, that’s all that matters to me.

XTRA | Be honest.  Is Your Screenplay Entertaining?

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