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Short Film Editing: Letting Go Of A Scene | Editing Blog

IN OR OUT?

I showed some footage of my short film, The Climb to my producing partner Eric the other day.  The plan was simple.  I was going to show him the new sequences I just locked and then go over the entire film scene by scene.  What I failed to mention to him was a fairly major change I’ve been thinking about.

Cutting one of the opening scenes completely…

It was interesting to watch that 2 minute scene play out.  Could I lose it entirely?  Will the film be better or worse?

When the footage was over, Eric made a suggestion.  He wondered what it would be like if we lost the exact scene I was thinking about cutting.  (We work well together for a reason.) We discussed the changes in depth.  The issue at hand is whether or not I can get rid of a scene that I love and whether the story will survive without it.  Every director must face these decisions but it’s tougher when you’re the editor as well.

  • The director in me is attached to the scene.
  • The editor in me knows it will make the film tighter and potentially better.

It’s a tug of war I’ve been dealing with ever since.  Truthfully, I haven’t even taken the scene out yet.  I made the excuse to leave it in until the whole film is locked.  Then I’ll step back and evaluate the film’s pacing and whether or not I’ve told a good story.

Letting go of a scene is hard.  There are always moments in a film you can’t bare to lose but I think you HAVE to make those tough decisions.  In the end, it’s all about crafting something you can be proud of but also a film that will entertain other people as well.  I’ve definitely taken my time editing this film but I’m in no hurry.  The Climb is an exercise.  How many different ways can I cut a scene?  What if I lost this line of dialogue?  Would this moment work better earlier in the film?  Can I cut out this scene entirely?

In a way, editing The Climb has made me a better screenwriter.  It’s interesting to see the impact one passion in my life has on another.

At the end of the day, I don’t think I see this particular scene making the final cut.  No matter how much I enjoy it.  A short film is meant to get in, tell you a story and get out.  The scene I want to lose delays that right now.  It slows down the beginning of the film.  So, for now, I have 4 options.

  1. Leave it in.
  2. Move it somewhere else.
  3. Re-Edit with a different approach.
  4. Cut it out.

I’m not entirely sure what I’ll do but the process is inspiring.  The Climb has been a wonderful opportunity to grow as an editor and a filmmaker.  That’s exactly the kind of project I wanted it to be.

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Editing A Short Film: Planning The Trailer | Editing Blog

A old friend of mine once said “Not because you could, just because you can.”  It’s impossible to explain how funny that comment was but it’s strangely perfect for this post.   You don’t always have to make a trailer for a short film.  But isn’t it fun to edit one together anyways?

The time has come to start thinking about the trailer for The Climb. I’ve been having so much fun editing lately that I started pulling out shots that I know/hope will make the trailer.

What I don’t know is how I will structure the piece.  I don’t know what tone it will have and how I will pace things out.  These are fundamental decisions you have to make when deciding how to sell your film to audiences.

XTRA: Does this poster sell my independent short film?

When I set out to create a trailer for our last short film Playing Through, I struggled with it.  The film balances humor with an extremely emotional situation and I had wanted to find a way to convey both.  There was a very fine line I had to be sure not to cross.  Too far in one direction would have led people to believe it’s a comedy.  Too far in the other direction and people would have given people the impression that the whole film is depressing.

I tried a number of approaches and in the end, I decided to somewhat separate both elements.  This way, I could introduce the two main characters and then gradually integrate the emotional story line.

What do you think?

I think I succeeded but some people still found it hard to determine what tone the movie actually has.  Is it a comedy or isn’t it?  These are all lessons I hope to apply to my new project.  Whether they are right or not it’s still something every editor should think about.  Especially when you’ve written and directed the film.

How do I show people what my movie is about?  How do I engage an audience and generate interest?

The trailer for Playing Through is nearly 2 minutes long.  That’s pretty long for a twenty minute movie.  Perhaps I should have made the trailer shorter?  These are the thoughts I constantly struggle with now as I plan my new project.

It’s important to be honest when creating a trailer.

You have to put your film out there.  How many times have you seen a trailer that was nothing like the finished movie?  You go in thinking it’s going to be an action movie and are shocked to find something different.  (Superman Returns?  Anyone?)

Having said that, I’m proud of the way I cut the Playing Through trailer but I’ll always question things.  It’s a part of my personality.  I’m a perfectionist and I’m extremely critical of my editing and writing.

So now, as I near the end of the editing phase of post production for The Climb, I find myself excited to take on a brand new trailer and introduce the film as best as I can.  I started writing notes and came up with a list of elements I want to include in the trailer that I felt would best represent the story I’m trying to tell.  Selecting these moments can be tough.  You have to leave room to try different things.  You have to be fearless and willing to start over from scratch if something isn’t working.  I’ve got a rough idea of what I want but only time will tell if the trailer will be effective.

Creating a trailer for your short film is not always necessary but as an editor it’s a blast.  I tend to find it intimidating and you may put the same pressure on yourself when you embark on such a creative journey.

But it’s vital that you get it right.  Right?

Especially when you can’t afford to hire a gigantic marketing firm with an army of researchers and creatives ready to tackle your project.

It’s all a part of the fun of making independent films.  It’s addictive.

The Climb Short Film | 17 West Productions

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Editing: How A Dialogue Heavy Script Became A Quiet Movie

I love editing.

Whether it’s at work or at home with Final Cut Pro I’m hooked.

Currently, I’m completely engrossed in my new short film, The Climb.  We shot the film in May but post has been a slow process due to life in general.

Still, I’m not working with a deadline and so it’s nice to be able to work on it when I can.  A few weeks ago, I dedicated myself again and really thought about the completed film and what I want it to be.

The result of that thought process surprised me.

The script for The Climb was a finalist in a screenwriting competition way back in the 2007.  It ended up being 4th out of about 1200 short scripts.

The script itself was always dialogue heavy and as it evolved, it was even more dependent on dialogue.

XTRA: Tweaking Your Screenplay

When we shot the film, I thought that the actor’s delivery of those lines would make or break the movie.  They did a great job but something else about their performances struck me and changed the direction of my edit.

Some of the dialogue wasn’t needed.  I’m very happy we were able to capture some of the quieter moments on set when we had the chance.  I always intended to shoot beyond the dialogue on the page and it definitely paid off.

Now, I can sit back and watch the first 5 minutes of the film and marvel at the 3 minutes of silence at the beginning.  The same information is being conveyed but no one is saying anything.

Quicker cuts.  Better pacing.

I’ve definitely learned to step back and really think about each shot and what it means to the story as a whole.  It’s an opportunity to be creative and that’s why I love editing so much.  So many possibilities.  So many things to try and the only limit is your imagination.

I’m having a blast.

It’s a far cry from the screenplay we filmed but that script did it’s job well.  Now it’s time to build something original and entertaining.

Editing.  I love this stuff.

XTRA: The Climb Update

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17 West Productions Independent Film Production Company Toronto

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Editing Short Films

I wrote and directed The Climb.

I also happen to be a professional editor and I love to cut short films but I was worried about falling into a well known trap.

The Singular Vision Trap

When I’m at work, I’m editing based on a producer’s vision and executing that vision.

In my office at home, I play both roles and a lot of the creative decisions fall on me.  This type of freedom can be a positive and a negative.

  • On the one hand, I don’t have to answer to anyone so I can edit the movie I want to see.
  • On the other, I don’t have to answer to anyone and the movie may not be any good.

Essentially, I have to be sure to distance myself from the material from time to time and make sure to listen to people’s suggestions when they see finished scenes.

At the same time, I have to make sure that the movie remains mine. It’s a tough balance but I equate editing to writing and I love revisions.

I started editing The Climb last week. I stayed away from the footage for a while so I would look at the footage with fresh eyes.  This paid off while I was logging the clips.  Watching everything we shot gave me a good idea of the final shape of the movie.

The first thing I laid down on the timeline was the 17 West logo and began with the opening scene.

Normally, I like to edit in sequence.  This isn’t always the case but it’s a good place to start isn’t it?

Unfortunately, the opening scene wasn’t really working the way I originally planned it to be.  This is a perfect example of the dilemma Director/Editors can sometimes face.

At what point do I abandon my first instinct and try a new approach?

Tough call…

Indeed, I was stuck but the solution was simple:

Edit something else.

Try and shape the following scene and apply the pacing and tone to the one giving you problems.

Cutting scenes out of sequence ultimately led me away from the troubled opening scene.

The Result?

Clarity. A new approach to the scene arrived naturally and I’m back on track.

This is editing.  I enjoy editing.

17 West Productions Toronto

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Editing A Short Films

Logging and capturing footage can be extremely long and tedious but it’s important work.

Trying to edit a ton of unorganized footage is a huge pain so you may as well do it right.

It’s no secret that I’m not a fan of capturing footage. It’s fairly time consuming especially when all I want to do is edit!

I knew going in that I would have to capture all the footage we shot for The Climb myself.

Normally, I would put it off as much as possible before starting but this time, I had a deadline.

It turned out to be a blessing in disguise.

Our camera was borrowed and had to be returned first thing Monday morning.  This meant that all of the footage we shot had to be captured before we lost the camera.

We shot about roughly 6 hours of footage in total.

At the end of each day of shooting, I sat down, captured and watched each tape one by one.  It’s a lot easier to do when you have a deadline.  It was actually quite fun because most of the time, the crew was still around so I wasn’t by myself.

It also helps that Final Cut Pro makes ingesting footage relatively pain free.

I had a late night on Sunday but it was an amazing feeling knowing all the footage was digitized and ready to be organized and ultimately edited.

I woke up Monday morning with a smile on my face.

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