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Short Screenplay Rewrites For The Self Conscious | Screenwriting Blog

GETTING OVER THE UNCERTAINTY

I wrote a script two years ago that was revived last week.  To date, I had written 3 versions of the script and the Producer/Director team interested have been happy with all of them.  It’s simply a matter of logistics, funding and scheduling that has delayed things.

A while back, the director posed a slight change to the structure of the story so I got to work on the 4th version of the screenplay.  I also took the opportunity to change a few tiny details here and there.  Mostly dealing with how certain scenes were staged.

As I wrote the 4th draft of the script, I found myself wondering why I hadn’t thought of certain things before.  I started doubting myself.  I was more than happy with the 3rd draft and even though a lot of time has passed, are my opinions really that different?  Have I changed as a writer?

Of course, the answer is yes.  I have changed and evolved as a writer.  The whole point is to get better with every page.  Every sentence even.  I’m sure I’m not alone on this but I became anxious about it.  Each new draft of this particular story I’ve written has been the best draft yet.  This line of thought led me to a very real fear that screenwriters can experience.

WHAT IF THE NEXT DRAFT IS BETTER TOO?

Essentially, I printed out the 7 page script and wrote most of it from scratch.  The story remained the same but I restructured a lot of material and eliminated a few moments that were no longer needed.  I ended up trimming nearly 2 pages out of the screenplay and it definitely reads a lot faster.

The entire time I was asking myself if I was over thinking things.  Was I over simplifying the story?

After a while, I decided to print out the new script as well.  I read them both line by line picking out the best possible moments from each.  This step paid off as I came to a realization.

DON’T FOCUS ON THE ‘NEXT’ DRAFT

Just write the best possible draft you can right now.

Once I combined the two drafts of the screenplay, a couple key moments returned and the story was even better.  I was so focused on trimming that I hadn’t taken a step back to consider what I had lost.  My self conscious fear actually led to improvements in my writing. Neat.

I’m pretty happy I made that decision because the new draft is 100% my favorite thus far.  The Champion Draft as I call it.

BUT WHAT IF THEY WANT ANOTHER DRAFT?

The answer is simple. If another draft is required down the road, I’ll just work hard and create a new Champ.  What I love about rewrites is the incredible amount of problem solving challenges you must face and eventually overcome.

There’s nothing more satisfying than coming up with a BETTER idea.

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Short Screenplays & Minor League Baseball | Screenwriting Blog

FEELING BLOCKED? CALL UP ONE OF YOUR
SHORTS SCREENPLAYS FROM THE MINORS

I’ve spent a lot of time developing my new feature length screenplay lately.  It’s incredibly action heavy which is a big change for me so I’ve also been writing some action shorts as well.  These scripts probably won’t see the light of day but it’s still fun to experiment.

It got me thinking about all the shorts I’ve written over the years.  Some were written in the hopes of being produced and some have been produced.  Some I wrote just to test a new waters while others I wrote to set up a future feature length project.

All of them are useful tools that have helped me improve my screenwriting skills. In this way, writing shorts is a great way to train yourself and work on your weaknesses.  It’s a great way to become a better writer.

In this case, it’s the short scripts I intend to base features around that fit into my definition of:

The Screenplay Minor Leagues

It’s a different and fun way to look at your body of work.  In my group of short screenplays there are a few standouts and there are scripts that are meant to be role players in a larger picture.  Others will probably never be ‘called up’ but they still served a purpose at some point.  The same can be said of Minor League Baseball players.  Each player works hard to make it to the big leagues.

These players live to be called up someday and experience the next level.  Not only that, they strive to excel at the next level.

Note: Before you ask, the answer is yes.  I am comparing inanimate screenplays to living baseball players.

I think a lot about which short scripts I may call up someday.  Ideas that can be expanded into feature length stories.  Perhaps I’ll only use a character or a specific scene or element but having a stable of ‘players’ ready to go is a great way to kick start new ideas.

Short Screenplays & Minor League Baseball | Screenwriting Blog

Are you stuck?

Why not retrieve some old scripts that are toiling away in the minors and see if they have what it takes to be pros.  You never know when something will inspire you and bring an old idea back to life.

At the same time, if you find yourself stuck writing something new or attempting a different style, give a short screenplay a shot.  It’s a way to take the pressure off when you aren’t trying to make sure every word fits into the big picture.

  • Write an action scene and work on pacing.
  • Write a funny story to see if you can make yourself laugh.
  • Write a horrific scene and see if you can make yourself cringe in fear.
  • Let other people read them.  Get feedback.

Write!  Evolve.

The short screenplay I wrote last week to help get my mind into ‘action’ mode reminded me how much I love action movies.  It also taught me to really think about my action sequences and make sure they are as entertaining as possible.  Whether it gets produced or not, I feel better about tackling my feature script.

XTRA: Be honest.  Is your screenplay entertaining?

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The Athletic Nerd: Screenwriting

After this post, I thought it would make sense to ACTUALLY follow my own advice and write.  Not just talk about it…

So, I woke up, checked out my daily websites and got right to it.

It turns out, it’s easy to write screenplays when you sit down and… write.

I decided to go with a family/drama I’ve been considering for a while.  It’s a concept I’ve been working on for ages but until a few weeks ago, I didn’t know what to do with it.

Then I had one of those shining moments when I knew exactly what to do.

Why didn’t I write it?

I didn’t feel like I had enough time.

I was 100% wrong.

After about 2 hours of work, I completed a 10 page script that could definitely make an interesting short film.

Note: All that development work definitely pays off.

I feel like a screenwriter again.

Writing a script is such a rush and there is nothing better than finishing a new story.  What surprised me was how emotional this story became.  It evolved as I wrote it and became a touching story about losing a loved one.

These types of breakthroughs can only happen when you’re actually typing pages.  You can develop stories forever but the little details will never emerge until the pages stack up.

Every writer should push themselves.  There comes a time when you have to tell yourself to shut up, sit down and write!

Yesterday was that day for me and it couldn’t have worked out any better.

Next I plan to return to my feature script.

I suppose what I’m trying to say is:

I enjoy writing screenplays.

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